Indians haiku
A co-worker just sent me a hiaku. He's following today's Indians-Yankees game on the internet, so you can see where his poetic inspiration came from:
"Bases juiced, one out.
Jhonny Peralta strikes out.
Casey Blake fouls out."
He switched the order of the outs to fit the haiku rules, but you get the idea.
It reminded me of a series of dog haikus I saw somewhere a few years ago. So I thought I'd post his entry here to see if anyone can add some good ones to the thread. Any Tribe fan poets out there want to follow up?
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Re: Indians haiku
Blake chokes again, lifts foul pop.
Peralta rung up.
Re: Indians haiku
sacks are loaded with tribesmen
ducks left on the pond
Re: Indians haiku
Why not groove one to Josh Phelps?
Help! Avalanche! Aargh!
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Another bullpen meltdown
Song remains the same
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crap crap crap crap crap crap crap
crap crap crap crap crap
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Pythagorean record
Should we feel lucky?
Re: Indians haiku
a fresh arm...to call the 'pen:
Torey Lovullo.
by fleerdon on Apr 19, 2007 5:43 PM EDT reply actions
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With predictions of grandeur
Why aren't we convinced?
Re: Indians haiku
The work and game are grotesque
Soon we will be home
by homelytourist on Apr 19, 2007 6:24 PM EDT reply actions
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I sit at my desk
The away game is grotesque
Soon we will be home
by homelytourist on Apr 19, 2007 6:44 PM EDT up reply actions
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Watched the game on CBS
Grades and life suck hard
(never written a haiku, is that one right?) For the record, that was CBS Sportsline.
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by Turkmenbashi on Apr 20, 2007 3:50 PM EDT up reply actions
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Where can we get true relief?
The Cleveland Clinic.
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Sometimes I think the bullpen
Couldn't cut for team Oberlin
I gotta take a vicodin
Cuz they are Clevlin' Indians
by homelytourist on Apr 20, 2007 4:50 PM EDT up reply actions
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Three weeks out of proportion.
Let's not panic yet.
by Kos @ Let's Go Tribe! on Apr 21, 2007 1:37 PM EDT reply actions
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Game handed away again
Can we panic yet?
Re: Indians haiku
Hey, we're still at .500!
Better days ahead.
by Fiddlesticks on Apr 22, 2007 12:25 AM EDT up reply actions
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by fleerdon on Apr 23, 2007 12:38 AM EDT reply actions

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